Week 7 Story: The Game of Dice

 


I was strolling down the streets of Las Vegas, passing by all of the bright lights and the sounds of coin machines when I saw a casino that loomed over all of the others: The Crystal Palace.

Now, me being a newbie in the area, I had no idea what I was getting myself into when I walked in between those doors. At the time, all I could focus on was the sparkle of the casino, which definitely fit its name perfectly. There were huge crystalline chandeliers hanging from the ceiling that were almost blinding to look at as well as a center bar that was encased with mirrors. Everything in casino seemed breakable to touch or too nice for me to feel comfortable to place my hand upon it.

As I gazed around in wonder, I had not noticed two men coming down the stairs until the entire casino was in silence. Standing before me on the grand staircase were the two biggest casino leaders in Las Vegas: Mr. Pandava and Mr. D. No one knows what the mysterious Mr. D's real name is; rumor has it, he has killed many men and plans on killing Mr. Pandava himself.

I had realized until this moment that I had come to The Crystal Palace at the wrong time, as the two bosses were going head to head by playing the simple game of dice. They sat down at the biggest table in the casino and everyone gathered around to watch, even the casino staff.

The bids started out small, just a couple thousand for bid on the table. However, Mr. Pandava was absolutely horrible at dice and was beginning to become frustrated at Mr. D's arrogance. He began to bid everything he owned: his car, his home, his fortunes. He lost everything. Just when everyone in the casino thought Mr. Pandava would quit before losing his pride, he then put his wife, Padi, up for grabs. He lost just as easily as before.

Mr. D was very excited, as he had now taken everything from his enemy, including his beautiful wife. He started collecting everything and was walking towards Padi when suddenly there was a loud bang. The entire casino looked towards the sound and standing before us was Mr. D's father: The King. The King was one of the biggest and most powerful men in all of Las Vegas, I swear I saw some of the casino staff shudder in fear. 

Calmly, The King gave all of Mr. Pandava's things back to him, including Padi, without saying a single word. He quietly went over to his son, whispered something in his ear, and then they both left without a single word. The casino was silent, unsure of what had just happened. One by one, the casino staff returned to their station and turned back on the music. Just like that, all the casino patrons went back to playing their games as if nothing had ever happened. Mr. Pandava and Padi left as happy as they had arrived.

What we did not know was that Mr. D was even more furious than before. Until he takes everything from Mr. Pandava, he will never rest.

Author's Note
This story is actually from The Mahabharata when Duryodhana challenges Yudhishthira to dice knowing that he is absolutely horrible at it. The first time they play dice, Yidhishthira loses everything (including his wife) until Duryodhana's father, Dhritarashtra, returns it all and tells them to go home in peace. I kept the basic story the same except I changed the place, the names, and I told the story from the viewpoint of a bystander. For example, The Crystal Palace is the name of the assembly hall in The Mahahbharata, but in my story, I made the location Las Vegas with the halls being grand casinos. I felt that this fit the story well since they were playing a game of dice.

Bibliography: Narayan, R K. The Mahabharata. The University of Chicago Press, 1978.

Comments

  1. Hello Ashley! I did not read "The Mahabharata", instead I read "Tiny Tales from The Mahabharata". With that said, you did an excellent job of informing me about the original story that you used as inspiration for this story. The details you changed and added definitely made it a fun story to read. I am looking forward to other stories that you write throughout this semester!

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  2. Hi Ashley! I loved the story in which the dice game scene was mentioned in the Mahabharata! You made it so unique by creating it in a new environment – a casino in Las Vegas! I also enjoyed how you incorporated the original into a more modern-day twist story! Makes it a lot more relatable! I really enjoyed it, and very well done!

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  3. Hi Ashley. I liked the way you diverted from the original story in The Mahabharata by having it set in Las Vegas. This choice made it fun to read. Something that I thought was funny about your story was how you said the bets started out small at a few thousand which is not really a small bet, but compared to what was eventually bet by Mr. Pandava it was a small bet. And overall it was a fun read.

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  4. Hello Ashley! I really liked this retelling of the story, and I thought it fit really well. That scene where Duryodhana lost all of his things and his wife did feel like a very intense Vegas scene, so I understand this choice. I really liked how you wrote this because I could feel the tension between the two parties as I was reading. Choosing to view this as a bystander was a good choice.

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  5. Hi Ashley! I really enjoyed reading this story! I read the Tiny Tales option of this story and while reading it I was reminded a lot of Las Vegas and Casinos. You did an amazing job of putting this story into a more modern scene and it made me enjoy the story even more. I especially liked how the King Dhritarashtra was able to stay "the King" in both stories. Also, I think that by adding in that the King is blind would really add an edge to his character in your story.

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